Sir: As an avid reader of your magazine, I am pleased to see that its circulation is increasing. I feel, however, that it would appeal even more to the average reader if your contributors would refrain from using arcane words (like arcane) when more easily understood words are just as effective. I am English born, educated at an English grammar school, and gained an 'A' level in English Language for my School Certificate; yet even I find difficul- ty with some of your contributors' vocabu- lary.
I give an example from a recent issue, with my own translation into what is now commonly understood and spoken English:
porcine — piggish apercu — insight (or summary) explication — reason egregious — awful proselytise — preach obfuscate — tell lies derationated — not in any of my dictionaries disquisition — an essay oxymoron — use of contradictory terms hegemony — domination revisionism — doctrinal or theological dis- agreement anomie — lack of social graces polity — form of government demography — population statistics orthography — spelling collegiality — not in OED or Collins
I was able to define half of the above. I would suggest that 95 per cent of your potential future readership, i.e. those under the age of 35, would fail on all 16. Dot Wordsworth, please comment.
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